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Cafea

by ~PaperBombs

Azi, devreme, te-am vazut
Cum cadeai goala, neincetat.
M-am trezit din somnul greu
Si te-am gasit unde te-am pierdut in seara.
Nu stiu de ce, dar te-am vazut
Cum cadeai goala, neincetat.

Azi, devreme, te-am vazut
Cum te cufundai in aburi dulci.
Dimineti de primavara mi le arati
Cu ochii tai adanci, inchisi, negru pur
Nu stiu de ce, dar te-am vazut
Cum te cufundai in aburi dulci.

Nu stiu de ce
Dar te iubesc ca atunci.
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Titlul nu e nici o metafora. Chiar e o oda inchinata cafelei:)
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~Darksolitude Dec 9, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
am observat ca ai anumite motive pe care le repeti, cel mai evident fiind al cafelei. inteleg chestia asta, cred ca am zeci de scrieri in care apare motivul insomniei si anxietatii...foarte frumos scrisa...

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:icontamango:
iii ce tare'i !!!! Bv bv Verdeeeee ! :)

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danke

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There's nothing you can't do.



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:iconpoisonpurple21:
ideea e interesanta; citind incipitul, oricine-zic eu- ar fi tentat sa creada ca este vorba de o femeie.
ar mai fi de laudat paralelismul realizat in primele doua strofe:)
besides this, e mijto sa te trezesti dimineata si sa te bucuri in adevaratul sens al cuvantului de o cafea!:D

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I`ve lived a life that`s full/ And each & everyhighway/ And yet, much more than this/ I DID IT MY WAY (R.I.P. Sid Vicious-2nd febr`79)
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:iconpaperbombs:
da, am incercat sa realizez ceva care sa semene cu o metafora, fiind insa doar ceea ce pare:D

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:iconpoisonpurple21:
yep, am remarcat!... e un limbaj foarte subtil :)

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I`ve lived a life that`s full/ And each & everyhighway/ And yet, much more than this/ I DID IT MY WAY (R.I.P. Sid Vicious-2nd febr`79)
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~gutuiefiarta Apr 6, 2007  Professional General Artist
hm.. e buna. si am citit multe lucrari din astea. te zbati parca insa intre liric si proza. ai incercat sa scrii proza? hm... but congrats on it anyways, si eu sunt coffee-fan \m/

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:iconpaperbombs:
proza nu. coffee ownz but no "\m/" :D

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~gutuiefiarta Apr 9, 2007  Professional General Artist
how come no "\m/ ?

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:iconpaperbombs:
nu prea inghit semne de rocari matretzosi:D

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What if I wanted to Scream?
There's nothing you can't do.



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